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apid development of economics 改为rapid development of economy,
economics是经济学（学科）.而不是经济条件
new things come out continually,你的意思是新事物不断出现?建议改为 innovations keep coming out.
An encreassing number of people turn to onlinn education to improve their performance. 是 increasing! 还有performance有点别扭,改成personal abilities(个人能力）
The reasons for this phenomena can be stated as follows,把FOLLOWS的S去掉： as follow
Initially用firstly更好
so that,it make us covenient to broadcast information and communicate with others; 去掉that 只有个so就可以了
你这些句子都是中式英语,看得很别扭.错误不多但问题就是太中文化了.
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