帮我看一下这篇初一的英语作文有什么问题
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This year,in August 9th,the No.8 typhoon,Molake was landing at Xiapu,Fujian.In August 10th till 11th ,Molake was arrived Zhejiang.Although the weather was cold with heavy rain pouring down from the sky and windy,I went to the English class the same as usual.At the 8:00 am,I went to the Hangzhou Children Palace.I walked to the bus stop first.When I awaited the bus,a car was driving quickly and near to me,and my clothes was splashed with dirty water.
