My dream
Hello,everyone!I'm LiuWu from Class 17 in Electric Appliance Major.I am 18 years old and I like playing basketball,watching TV and making new friends.
18即可;
Today,I'm really honored to be here doing this speech.
doing:可用addressing.
First of all,I want to thank my parents for giving me my life,birth,give birth to sb..
so I can stand here.
so I am here speaking to you,这句可省.
And second,I must thank my teaches,for they orgnized this activity,who organized ...
so I have the chance to pratice.( 也可省 )
I also wanna thank my English teacher,
she teaches me from letters to words,from words to sentences,from sentences to passages.
she teaches不如 现在完成进行时,因为过去教,现在也在.
from ABC to ...(没想起后边怎么说,自己参考)
So I think I am a luckier man.
I am really lucky.
Now,I want to say "Thank you" to all of you!
(引子有些长,尽量缩短!)
Today I am going to talk about “My Dream”.
I have a dream,the dream is that I can spread my wings and fly around the world.
两个dream用定语从句省略一个.
For traveling around the world,money is essential.
这里money is a must更好,意思是钱是必须的.
Then how can I get it?
earn?
My dream is to become a big boss,so that I'm not under control of anyone,
My dream is to become such a big boss that I am no longer under control of anyone else.
and I will enjoy a very high salary.
(笑,大老板自己就不给自己开工资了.)
Then I will travel around the world,
and help to poors to let people know that there is still something called 'love' in thid world.
poor要加the代表 穷人.
I know there is a distance between my dream and the fact.
distance,用gap怎样?fact 考虑换个词?和real搭边.
But I believe if I work hard,it will come true sooner or later.
It is also said that"Nothing is impossible to a willing heart." 怎么又是引语 又是引号?
It is conviction that it will get its real rewards with my
conviction:convicted.
endeavor and pays.hardwork即可.
My future is not a dream.I am confident that it will come true.
That's all,thank you!
演讲稿越通俗越好
多练练发音.
