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标注有# # 字样的都是我修改的地方,可以参考一下;

Winter solstice is a very important# 换成significant# solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.

#during the early# Spring and Autumn period, 2500 odd years from now, Winter solstice was first determined as #不用加the的# Chinese traditional solar term among the total 24 terms. In Gregorian calendar, it is around Dec 22nd or 23rd.

As far as in the Spring and Autumn Period 2,500 years ago, Chinese people adopted the methods of tugui to measure the shadow of the sun to #for表原因.to表结果、目的# determine the twenty-four solar terms,#among which the winter solstice was firstly fixed#, roughly around 22-23 December in the lunar calendar.

Midwinter day is the very day in North hemisphere with the shortest day and longest night year-round. After it, daytime will #increasingly become#比较符合表达习惯 longer and the # cold weather will invade all over the places in Northern part globally#. We Chinese always call it "JinJiu", which means once Winter solstice comes, we will #enter# the coldest time ahead.

#This celebration# 这个词出来的比较莫民奇妙,因为你前面都没有提到过这是一个celebration can be traced to the Chinese belief in yin and yang, which represent balance and harmony in life. It is believed that the yin qualities of darkness and cold are at their most powerful at this time, but it is also the turning point #that gives# way to the light and warmth of yang. #As a result#, the Dong Zhi Festival is a time for #being# optimism.

Ancient #Chinese# did pay great attention to this #term#, regarding it as a big event. There was the saying that "Winter #Solstice# holiday is greater than the# Spring Festival#". Nowadays, many regions still celebrate it as a big holiday.

The coming # winter# is celebrated by families and a traditional time when farmers and fishermen #gathered# food in preparation for the coming #season#. It is also a time for family reunions.

Northerners may have #Chinese# dumplings and raviolis that day while southerners may have rice and long noodles. Some places even have the tradition to offer sacrifices to the heaven and earth.

Dong Zhi is celebrated #nationwide#. The longest night of the year is a time to put on #new clothes#, #to# visit #other families# with gifts and to #have fun# and drink until late night.

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