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Today is my mother's birthday. My father and I wanted to give her surprising food as the first birthday present for her.
In the morning we went to the shop and bought a big cake. Then we went to the market and bought some food that mother liked very much. After getting home, we began to prepare our presents. Father went into the kitchen to prepare a big meal . It was almost 12 o'clock. The delicious food on the table made my mouth water. Everything was ready. We seated ourselves at the table, waiting for my mother. When we heard the sound of opening the door, we hid behind the door and cheered, "Happy Birthday!" as soon as mother came in.
Mother was seated at the table and my father said,"this delicious food on the table is the first present for your birthday" . She looked at it and smiled. "Have a taste of the delicious food. It was made by Father himself."I said. Mother looked at my father and me, picking up her chopsticks.
How happy we were!
今天是妈妈的生日,爸爸和我想给她令她惊喜的食物作为第一份生日礼物.
早上我们去商店买了一个大蛋糕.然后我们去了市场,买了妈妈最喜欢的食物.回家后,我们就开始准备我们的礼物.爸爸进了厨房,去准备一顿好饭. 快12点了,桌上可口的食物让我直流口水.一切准备妥当,我们坐在桌旁等着妈妈.当我们听见开门的声音时,我们躲在门后,妈妈一进来我们就欢呼“生日快乐!”
妈妈坐在桌旁,我爸爸说,“这一桌美餐就是给你的第一份生日礼物”,妈妈看着这桌菜笑了.“尝尝这些好吃的菜吧,这都是爸爸做的.”我说.妈妈看着爸爸和我,拿起了筷子.
我们多么幸福啊!
