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One time when you recall your memories- the life is unpredictable like weather. Sometime it's good and sometime it's bad, just like when you are young you are innocent and pure untill you grow up. You become a mean person. maybe it's the herald maybe it's The rain come suddenly that haven't any herald. Yesterday the sky looked lovely. When I am still a little girl. I believe everything. All the things that adults say I believe. I believe all the things that world tell me untill I have grown up. The pressure come from pople around me. The Bad behavior come from the news. The sad feeling come from somebody who hate me. At the time when I recalled all above things come to me. I curse someone who make me unhappy like the queen from the story of Snow White. Am I an evil like the sister from Cinderella ? Am I so mean like the witch from Mermaid? I stop till something good happened to me or punishment come to me one day or I become strong and save myself. All thing hardly changes in a good way .At a time when you think all bad thing come to you, maybe you will become a mean person but if you are strong enough to face all bad thing, you will become a kind person again like the weather after rainy day. it's sunny.

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