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If I was free to choose a place to live. I would like to choose the spaceship. In the spaceship, the beautiful landscape will take my breath away. I was interested in being a astronomy when I was young, I read many books about astronomy and if I live in a spaceship, I could see the true planet through the window, which is absolutely what I want. I can see the huge Jupiter, the beautiful mars, the mystery moon and so on. So I will learn more knowledge through observing the planet, and I can also get many precious experiences in the space. The most attractive thing is that man is weightless in space, like flying . I will be very excited if I can fly ,And maybe I can take an adventure in the universe; maybe I can meet some aliens and develop a friendship with them. As you can see, I can learn more and get many interests in the universe.