英语作文 请指出我的英语错误并麻烦丰富一下
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错误:Please will write to me soon这个句子有错误:无主语,可以这么改:加一个主语You

或去掉will

丰富:①第一句:改为I am a boy whose name is Zhang Hong.

②I am interested in enjoying English music.可以改为:I am very pleased when I listen to English music.

③I have a good time traveling with my parents and my friends.改为:I am happy that I have a good time traveling with my parents and my friends