请帮我检查一下我的这篇英语作文.如果发现错误,请指出并帮忙改正.
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you will come to - you are coming to

historic spots and interest places - historic and interesting places

I suggest that you can go and vist - I suggest that you(should) go visit

When you climb on the Great wall - When you are climbing up the Great wall

In the other days - on the following days

other famous place - other famous places

你的语法知识方面已经很不错了,没有太大的问题.

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