I like traveling around the world with my father.缺动词
One day,we went to Hong Kong.时态错
On first day,we went to Disney Park with them.介词不对 不过问题不大
There were many games 时态问题
We were so excited that we eat many food,but .自己看吧~
We stayed there for about three hours.时态~
It wasa short time and it was a big shame,too.
But we took lots of photos and we bought some presents.
We had a good time during this trip.
主要是时态问题~介词搭配~这是改错么?还是初二刚学过完?