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1. Most architects are aware of applying sustainable and ecological technologies in their designs. However, only a few projects can be classified as Positive Development. For instance, few if any, designers’ integrating methods are able to make the building structures work by themselves: most designers still negatively add machines on somewhere of the buildings thus cause environment stress.
2. However, the white central area of the diagram represents the research domain which has been ignored by the design-research community. The unexplored area means the combination design of indoor water system, outdoor water system, the building, and the landscape. In order to do contribution in this research area, the researcher will do a whole water system design for both the vertical farm and the landscape in ANSI project and will analyse the whole design process.
3. However unlike the classic traditional design process as the spiral described, in ANSI water design project we will try analyse a different and more advanced integrated design process.
4. Integrated design is a method used when all kinds of specialized knowledge are needed in a green project. Based on integrated design concept, architects and engineers need to do consultations from the beginning of a project. The consultants may include structural, mechanical, electrical, and plumbing engineers.
5. Box 1 tells us that the digital modeling tool may not only assist designers in building a virtual model for their ideas but also analyzing sustainability before the project is structured.
6. For example, we need to know whether the ground on ANSI site is loose, where the suitable areas to place the swales are, and how to slow the water gathering speed. The alternative device used for ANSI stormwater drainage is aimed to save 30% expenses.
7. In the ANSI project, it is intended to build a water elevator based on the two principles reviewed above. The elevator is situated in the middle of the vertical farm as shown in Figure 26.
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