括号里是正确的或要加上去的~
You held(hold) me tight and told me I had (been) drunk.(tight也可以做副词,不必要改成tightly的,我觉得tight比较好听~)
What you’ve done really makes(made) me surprise(surprised).
That you love(loved) me or I’m just lost my mind.
You kissed me so long and I couldn’t say(tell) why,(这里没有语法问题,只是用tell比较符合英语习惯)
You said that it’s(it was) not the whole of my life.
The pages keep(has kept ) turning,
You told me that don’t believe my(your) eyes.(这是她对你说的原话,注意人称)
I said I should have known it is(they were) all lies.
Wait up for(wait for) an answer all through the night.
You said I’m(was) the only one who should be to blame.
只是一些时态问题,说明你的英语还是不错的,而且句子蛮流畅的,读来朗朗上口,嗯,加油哦~!