英语作文改分(37个结果)

最佳答案：have you heard the story of HouYi?He had shotted downn nine suns,however it's ju

最佳答案：Today,our teacher Miss Penny had a bad cold and in bed,So we helped her to do ho

最佳答案：你的作文存在几个问题：个别单词拼写错误,序数词排列问题,有些语句累赘,人称代指混乱,还有情态动词后的动词要用原形.按你的原意修改后的作文如下：Nowadays,

最佳答案：水平有限,只能改改病句,还没达到打分的水平,望理解.话说没看到你的作文啊~

最佳答案：语法错误还是蛮多的,这样你即使有亮点也被掩盖了.尤其到后面,错误太多.50分不能再多了.这文还有一个硬伤,就是有几句中式英文的句子.

最佳答案：本人英语一般,但还是进来看了看.我感觉写的蛮好的.说点我的感想哈.第一呢,delay 你是想表达耽误学生学习么?我感觉这词不是很适合.第二,好像句子都是很简单的

最佳答案：在尊重原文的基础上修改如下：In recent years, it is more and more popular to learn online. why

最佳答案：It was Summer. l came to Guilin by train. As soon as I left the station, a few m

最佳答案：Dear Mr Smith,I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t join in the outing tha

最佳答案：嗯.多看作文书提高阅读知识语句通顺没错别字

最佳答案：第三行 I started to prepare it earlier than my classmates did第四行 diligent as I was

最佳答案：I am very glad to have received your letter.you asked my about my life on weeken

最佳答案：Winter holiday is approaching. What am I going to do?I want to go to Beijing whi

最佳答案：Gulliver's TravelsGulliver's Travels is a fantasy （此处应该为fantasty）novel,(which is

最佳答案：My parents are the person who in my heartWhen we were children ,parents looked a

最佳答案：大概改了一下,原文写的不错,意思很到位,分数不会低.What Electives to ChooseNowadays, there are various el

最佳答案：Humans are facing a big problem about the environment, which is a really serious

最佳答案：We played happily there.；we had a great time.更好2,用of 3.Then it was dark.We found

最佳答案：Is it necessary to celebrate (the去掉) birthday in restaurant?Now more and more st

最佳答案：I was moved by the film .Every successful person who does a poineering work in h