评初三的英语作文,打分并将错误之处修改(满分10分) (先谢谢帮我改作文的人,我的作文水平很烂的)
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My parents are the person who in my heart

When we were children ,parents looked after us and gave all that they had for us . (At the part of the happy time from our parents to make)(这句真看不懂).They give us some useful ideas and believe us all the time .

Time flies ! We become matural grils or boys,but our parents are no longer young.We had learned much knowladges from our parents.They have a huge influence on us.

we shoud love our parents and give something back to them .