求英语大神帮校对这篇短篇英语自我介绍演讲稿有无语法错误或其他,
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Today I have a self-introduction.去掉,不需要

I'm 13 years old.就可以了

I Ilike my new school because it is beautiful,and teachers are very responsible.

I make lots of friends here,such as Ivy,Teresa,Amily and so on.

Ivy is smart and kind while Teresa is really qute.

share time改为 spare time

书名号去掉,可写成斜体或加下划线

and i like art class the best改为 art class is my favourite class because it is interesting

So,when I grow up,I want to be a artist可改为 therefore,I want to be an artist in the future.

if I hard enough --- If I work hard

I will success --- I will succeed

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