我觉得organ你不大可能touch的到吧·······太恐怖了···
1.the article need more logical pattern
2.many grammar mistakes!some expressions might not be wrong in grammar but there is simply no such kind of expression in English!Pay attention to that!
帮你改几句错的特别明显的（基本上句句都有问题,你还不如重写-_-|||）
首先是题目》》 My Journey of English Learning
后面因应把experience 改掉!experience 有经历经验的意思,很明显你在英语上没有经验.而且~根本没有这么表达的!
In fact,they didn”t understand me yet "Yet" 最好不要这么用
From then on ,I show a great interest in English .such as watch the movies from America and England,communicate with English native speakers 凑字数的是吧?Hollywood movies 不就可以了?还有“communicate"是个大词,意味沟通,你最好改成chat
When I went to junior middle school,maybe I am not fint in the teacher”s teaching methods.前后时态不一致啊,还有fint in是什么?
So I found English class was upset and boring.English class cannot be "upset"!
Because all we can do were remembering words,把remembering改成memorizing
不改了,这文肯定是金山快译写的!
