英语语法检查求大神帮忙修改！！！！

Those who support the boys and girls should study in separate school might argue that some research shows that men tend to speak more in the men group, and the women also speak more when they stay with girls. The scientists believe that can increase efficiency of work. Even if this is true, it still does not means they girls and boys should study separately. According to the article ‘sex roles” that write by Hamilton McCubbin and barbara Blum Dahl, it talk about “men’s brains work in such a ways as to give them superior visual-spatial skills, while woman’s brain may give them an advantage in verbal skill” it means the boys are usually good at math,physics…. conversely, the girls usually do better on speaking, writing, reading….If the girls and boys study in separate school, they were hard to learn knowledge in a balance way, so its better for the girls and boys study together, because they can help each other improve their learning skill. The girls and boys also tend to show their ability in front of the different gender, this stimulate them be more hard working.

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第一行research用复数，加es，show就不用第三人称单数，因为前面是some，表示不止一个。第四行第二个词应该是that吧

第四行倒数第二个应该是written，第五行talk加s，第五行最后一个词give改成gving，因为前面的to是介词，倒数第四行

in separated school,后面这句最好写成it is hard for them to learn knowledge in a balance,way去掉，倒数第三行有了so，后面就不应该有because了

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