Olympic Games opening ceremony

Olympic Games opening ceremony

Beijing Olympic Games is very well!The opening scenes of great.2008 Performances is very good.They formed characters is excited!

Chinese Painting in the Central of the playground.Is very very big!Special some people in the Chinese painting to painting.This is a very good ideas.

The opening ceremony of the show China's four great inventions.

Ignition ceremony are our people favorite,Li Ning Ignited a big torch.

This opening ceremony of the end.

备注:此话题对本人而言过于深奥,大部分未知的奥运单词来源于网络.

里面有没有什么语病语法错误等,有没有单词拼写错误?

本人只是中学生的说...

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Beijing Olympic Games is very good!perfect更好

They formed characters is excited!这一句里有两个动词啊 哥们……汗颜了 可以用从句 The characters that they formed is excited!

Special some people in the Chinese painting to painting.这句没看懂……

This is a very good idea.单数就不要s

The opening ceremony of the show China's four great inventions.这句没有动词 The opening ceremony shows the four great inventions of China .

Ignition ceremony are our people favorite,Li Ning Ignited a big torch.

这句也没太看懂 肯定的是our people不对 这里应该是同位语we people

This opening ceremony of the end.这句又没有动词 这是什么?短语?

PS：改的也不全对吧,还有些错都没改.同学,你要真把这作业交上去老师都哭了…… 网络是不可靠滴,也就查个单词吧,英语是要一点点自己学的.

好好努力吧~

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