一、原句中多了一个词——
要么改为:Because children grow older,they have access to make their own choices to eat..
要么改为:as children grow older,they have access to make their own choices to eat.
二、翻译
直译:因为/随着孩子们逐步长大,他们可以做到做出自己的选择去吃东西.
变通:因为/随着儿童逐步成长,他们可以做出确定吃什么的选择.
三、注释
have access to 可以接近,可以使用,可以到达,可以理解,可以做到
make choices 挑选,选择,选定