英语改错 Today,I am very unhappy.Because a bad grade of my exam.

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Today,I am very unhappy.Because a bad grade of my exam.My unhappy has last 2days.I can not realx until today .

I was very never when i would know my grade.But i was very sad when i knew my grade.I had thought that i could get a good grade.Maybe too many thing can not come ture as heart thinks it.I did not how to make me happy,so i ask help for my parents,but i did not get a good comfort that i want getting.I seated myself as a fool .

i know that getting a good grade i will happy.But i failed to do it.i know no one can help me except me,so i should make arduous efforts .who laughts last laughts best.i wish i can laught last and best.

麻烦大家帮我改改错误,我英语不好,

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在英语中,不要像汉语这样：今天,.英语习惯把时间放在最后,如：I am very unhappy today.其实你为什么要用unhappy这个词呢,I am not very happy today.是非常正宗的英语句子.

同样,because,but一般会用在句子中间部分,而不是句首.

需要改进的地方比较多呀.

你愁死我了,我把全篇给你改一下,如果你想继续提高自己的英语水平,还需要更多的努力!

I am not very happy today because of my bad examination results.The bad mood has continued for two days.I was very disappointed when I knew my position.It was not what I expected.Perhaps almost what people like will not be able to be realized.I have no idea how to make me happy,so I ask for help from my parents.Even though I did not feel good and I thought that I am a fool.I failed to get a good position to make myself happy.I know nobody could help me but myself,and I should make my best efforts.Who laughs last laughs best and I wish I can laugh last and best.

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