英文好的进来帮我看看这篇文有什么语法错误没 ＝ ＝We are a big family.We aren't rich
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Even we are common people,like everybody around us.
这句有问题,不是完整句.把 even 去掉就可以了
But we have a united heart.
不是完整句,把but 去掉
We grow cool in the hot days.Just because we are a family.
这两句和上下文联系不紧密,建议删去；且后面一句不是完整句
No matter whether we meet each other.No matter how long the future is.I promise we will overcome everything difficult hand in hand all the time.
合成一句(前两个句号变成逗号) ,再把 the future is 改成 will be,future用将来时
Let's continue our future with smile in our face.
continue是不及物动词,所以用 continue with
把 in our face 改成 on our faces
Let it isn't afraid any difficulties one day.
改成 let it not be afraid of any difficulties one day
差不多了,语法没问题了,如果要润色
