请帮我看看这段英文有没有什么语法错误
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First,I have drawn an analogy between Jo in Little Women and me. I am a hot-tempered, tough and unladylike girl who keeps optimistic in face of any challenging situation, a Jo in the real world. I am an eager searcher who continues exploring the world around me and finding ways to solve difficult problems. I am, like Jo, a woman solider, fighting for my interest and that of those I love. People always consider that I am swollen with pride when I am bragging that I am an expert in nearly everything. But I do fall in love with everything that has provoked my interest, for example, math.