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In the 21st century,with the development of the society,the pace of people’s life becomes very rapid.More and more Chinese people refer to eat fast food to save time.So many kinds of fast food spring up in China.

As China opened its door to the outside world,a lot of western fast food is known by Chinese people.There is no doubt that many of them are really delicious,like chips,hot dog,hamburger,and so on.Moreover,they are very convenient.KFC is the most popular one,and many people regard going to the KFC as a fashion.

However,is western fast food that good?In fact it is almost junk food which contains so many calories that can make you fat and unhealthy.

Chinese fast food seems to be much healthier than western’s.For example,noodle contains fewer calories but more vitamins and other element we need.It can improve our digestive system.Most of the conventional fast food is made from rice,cereal,vegetable and meat.

Eating fast food can save time and keep pace with this modern society.However,for the sake of our health,we should not eat too much.

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