Dear:Do you still remeber me?I am Lionel Hughyoung.I have be
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第二段第一句Maybe I will go to there again in next month.,go to there改为go there,去掉介词to.

第二段第二句,I told some information about you to my family members.读起来有点奇怪,如果改成I have told my family members so much about you.会更好一些.

They are all (very) interested in you.建议加一个very.