1.street和other中间加入the
2.shouting→calling
3.第二个He→It
4.去掉were 或 在were前加上who/that
5.√
6.So→But
7.decide→decided
8.by→at
9.that→what
10.graduated和university中间加入from
你补充个问题,我就由一楼变成二楼,心有不甘啊!
翻译:他在英语学习中取得了如此大的进步,以至于老师表扬了他.
He had made such great progress in learning English that the teacher praised him.
=He had progressed in learning English so greatly that his teacher praised him.