Recently, two men had been on a coral island for five days. They really hoped that they could stay on the island more time .They drived a boat which was seriously spoiled to repair at Virgin Islands.
要用过去是呀,there be 表示存在,觉得还是用人做主语比较好.
一直呆了五天,要用过去完成时,这样更好.
hope是个及物动词,直接就行了,不用用was.
"which been seriously "这里要用was,been不对.