这段话好文学.
I am aware of that,when numbers of people are going old ,we are growing up lillle by little .I am aware of that,as well,when others are walking along the lake (pond 也行),counting the shadows of flowers'leaves(petals也行) in the water,we are sighing in view of the scenery outside the classroom window.But I am greatly convinced that ,when the alluring flowers fade away,our splendid lives are blossoming silently.
只能说忠实原文,尽量华丽.高中生水平有限,
不过好励志啊.我喜欢.是你写的么?