英文很久没有动了,做了一套题,最后一题是作文,就试着写了一篇,请大侠帮忙改改,能给个很好的思路也很感激,因为经常看到作文
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拼写什么的我直接帮你改了先,很多词翻译出来的意思虽然一样,但是却不能用在相应的语境里

Different opinions on the traditional chinese medicine

Nowadays people have controversial ideas on TCM,(另起一句) some propose(用词错) it,and others oppose it.

For the proposers(用词错同上),TCM have many advantages.First,it is tender to our body,because their(应用单数)componets are all from plants and some are food and favor(用词错) in our daily life,so it is very safe.Secondly,it works from our whole boby (这句话多余,secondly后直接接下一句).TCM treat our body as a system,so if a part of our body becomes ill,TCM will cure it not always from the sick part,but from the part with other relative parts or from the whole body.Then after we get healthy,we probably become more strange(?stronger?更强壮?) than before.Lastly,the chinese medicine is much more cheaper(比什么便宜,要写出和什么对比) for our common people.

But for its opposers,TCM have many disadvantages and even should be abolished.Firstly they think it will take us a lot of time before TCM acts.people who had a very bad or earge(用词错) disease will lose the efficient(用词错) cure time.And they doubt if TCM really act on the disease.Maybe it just gives patient confidence and courage to fight with the disease.Because nobody has ever proved what is the real working thing used in the morden chemic mathine( TCM?).

The two parts resist their own idea (each other's ideas) and can’t agree with each other.I think the argument will last for a long time until someone can give a reasonable and reliable evidence for them.

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