英文很久没有动了,做了一套题,最后一题是作文,就试着写了一篇,请大侠帮忙改改,能给个很好的思路也很感激,因为经常看到作文题目就不知道该从哪里入手,而且也不知道有什么内容可写,光是想要写的内容就要花了我15分钟,心里很着急,
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tranditional chinese medicine(tcm) is a lawful institution in china and is still very popular.the chinese *** has a department in charge of tcm and there are a lot of tcm hospital and pharmaceutical factories in the country.yet tcm is never short of opponents,including fierce opponents calling for its abolition.please comment on the controversial status of tcm
different oppenions on the tranditional chinese medicine
nowadays people have controversial idea to tcm,some one propose it,and others oppose it.
for the proposers,tcm have many advantiges.first,it’is tender to our body,because their componets are all from plants and some are the food and favor in our daily life,so it is very safe.second,it works from our whole boby.tcm tread our body as a system,so if part of our body become ill,tcm will cure it not always from the sick part,but from the part with other relative parts or from the whole body.then after we get health,we probobily become more strange than before.last,the chinese medicine is much more cheaper for our common people.
but for its opposer,tcm have many disadvantiges and even should be abolished.first they think it will take us a lot of time before tcm acted,people who had a very badly or eargely disease will lose the efficient cure time.and they doubt if tcm really act on the disease.maybe it just give patiant confidence and courage to fight with the disease.because nobody has ever proved what is the real worked thing use the morden chemic mathine.
the two parts resist their own idea and can’t agree with each other.i think the argument will last for a long time untill someone can give a reasonable and relliable evidence for them.
请问critical thinking那个是什么意思?能否说具体点,请多指教,我也感觉到好像写的平淡点,没有太多说服力.能举例最好...
拼写什么的我直接帮你改了先,很多词翻译出来的意思虽然一样,但是却不能用在相应的语境里
Different opinions on the traditional chinese medicine
Nowadays people have controversial ideas on TCM,(另起一句) some propose(用词错) it,and others oppose it.
For the proposers(用词错同上),TCM have many advantages.First,it is tender to our body,because their(应用单数)componets are all from plants and some are food and favor(用词错) in our daily life,so it is very safe.Secondly,it works from our whole boby (这句话多余,secondly后直接接下一句).TCM treat our body as a system,so if a part of our body becomes ill,TCM will cure it not always from the sick part,but from the part with other relative parts or from the whole body.Then after we get healthy,we probably become more strange(?stronger?更强壮?) than before.Lastly,the chinese medicine is much more cheaper(比什么便宜,要写出和什么对比) for our common people.
But for its opposers,TCM have many disadvantages and even should be abolished.Firstly they think it will take us a lot of time before TCM acts.people who had a very bad or earge(用词错) disease will lose the efficient(用词错) cure time.And they doubt if TCM really act on the disease.Maybe it just gives patient confidence and courage to fight with the disease.Because nobody has ever proved what is the real working thing used in the morden chemic mathine( TCM?).
The two parts resist their own idea (each other's ideas) and can’t agree with each other.I think the argument will last for a long time until someone can give a reasonable and reliable evidence for them.
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