英语作文麻烦改正~就是这篇作文..有任何问题全部指出来~Yesterday I received an e-mail f
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my friends应改为单数my friend

period应改为复数periods

needs 的时态不对,应为 need

20~30minutes 该为20~30minutes’

use the telephone前面加上to

spend lots of time outside in nature and with animals 前面也加上to

and quiet、no traffic改为quiet and no traffic

not always 前加上are

as she like改为likes

、reading after school为and reading after school

wish后可跟双宾语,hope后则不能,I hope she everything will OK in Middle school是不存在的.应改为 I hope everything will OK for her in Middle school.