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When he went to buy some foods for lunch,in front of the store,he suddenly discovered that he lost his wallet - he had to starve this afternoon.When he got home in the evening,he found that his small black cat,Cross,had run away,but he couldn't do anything.He was really sad.Unfortunately,before the dinner,he suddenly discovered that there wasn't any salt left!Because he didn't want to go out,he had to eat pasta with tomato sauce for the dinner.What a poor people he was!

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