求英语语法 帝 帮忙check 下 Thanks for your giving!
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一、I agree with some people should focus to achieve the realistic goal.with的后面不该跟个句子吧
二、is best way to ,少了个the
三、cultivate them,应该是their
四、 such as a Steve jobs ,多了a
五、his successful is not easily,成功应该用名词,而且后面不该接副词.
六、Because Steve who was born a poor family, and he also was an orphan when he was child. 改为Steve was born in a poor family, and he was also an orphan when he was a child.
七、 However he never gave up his dream that becoming a great CEO.that改为of,因为that后面要跟句子.
后面的暂且不看了,太长了.给分啊.写得挺好的,就是语法还不太过关
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