帮我看看我的文章吧有什么毛病请指出 An optional course on English Time goes by
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I like English ,that’s why I chose it as my optional course.

And I first saw my optional course teacher,who is a man.

Then he corrects it.

And I felt it's very interesting.

Then I am going to say something about this course.

At last,reading and writing.My teacher taught us a lot of English words ,English manners and so on .

Don’t worry,I ‘ve forgot one thing.(这句话放在这里感觉怪怪的)

Oh,I hadn’t got a good mark.I was very sad.

Though it’s an optional course,no one has done anything that has nothing to do with the class.(这句不太好改,将就了哈)

It gave me a very good time,a peaceful time,a time I will never forget.

I wish to take it the next time!（是course直接用take就行了）

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