你这个是自己翻译的吗?错误有点多啊.还有就是没有谓语不算句子吧?
我改的这个你看行不行:
1 I Feel so tried after a long day;
2. I Start to do the first assignment of BRM;
3. I'm surprised to find that the students of IT faculty in UTS could install and use many of the genuine Microsoft softwares , including win 8.1 pro.
(安装和使用install and use,正版的genuine,还有就是include要改成including)