建议把it改为he/she以及its改为his/her
Mydog
Look at the picture.This is my lovely dog.Its name is Bobby.It has brown fur,a pair of watery big eyes with a hint of sagacity.It is said that set nose shows its being very healthy.Robust limbs to make it good look and handsome.Whenever I see it I want to give it a hug.When come home every day,it will be shaking its tail,jumping excitedly,barking welcomed.It likes sleeping.Most of the time,it sleeps in the its house.Sometimes it snore.If I have any action,it will beimmediately wake up,slightly raised head,looked warily around.At that time it looks like a fox.Bobby is very funny when having its meal.Most of the time it sits to eat,sometimes it will be lying down to eat.And it was often slylook at me,if I come,it will immediately low head,ward off its own bowl,lest Igrab it food.I very love Bobby,Bobby loves me also.But I see online recently,there were a lot of abuse of the dog.I am heartache of this very much.Dog has no other friend except us.So we should be kind to them,love them,and don't hurt them!