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It was half a year before I went aboard for study. I received a lot of presents. All were wrapped in color papers. Among them were two presents which really interested me. My sister bought me a book with color pictures about body language and customs in different countries . My brother gave a note which said 'my present had been put in your bedroom.' when i hurried into my bedroom I found a box. I opened the box and it was a pocket computer. I was very glad. I understand these two presents would help me using body language to communicate and improve my english.