来一个英语大大帮我检查一下面这段话的语法和时态.顺便帮我改的简洁些,礼貌些.顺畅些,地道些.
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I'm sorry it took me so long to reply your mail. I was too busy to check my mail because my new term had just begun. I have seen the photos, they look great. This field trip was a fantastic experience that I won't forget. Thank you, and wish you all a pleasant vacation in China.

这样地道多了,至于简洁么实在无能为力了,已经够简洁了,就这么几句话对吧.