帮忙 改一下错 10处Last week life didn't look very well for heart tr
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Last week life didn't look very well (改为good) for heart transplant patient.Barry Brooks from London.He was told six month (months) ago that he would need the operation if he is(was) to survive.He immediately planned to make the across Atlantic journey to the(a) hospital in Chicago to have the operation on (删除on).While he was in transit at JFK airport in New York,hereceived the news that his new heart had (加上 been) accidentally transported to other(another) hospital.Barry then had to get on a different plane to convey him to the hospital,there (where) the operation was carriedout in time.Barry is now gradually recovering from the transplant.But(And) he told us," I feel like being a new man-this new heart has changed my life."

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