To Whom It May Concern：
It is my pleasure to recommend Miss Wei, one of the outstanding students in our department, for her further study in your esteemed university.
Miss Wei is a very honest, creative, adaptive and intelligent student. She has the spirit of inquiry .As long as there is a question she doesn’t know, she won't stop asking until she get it. In a word, she has a strong desire for knowledge and spirit for researching. In my Business negotiating skills class, she showed her leadership by team up with other students. At the final exam,I organized a simulated business negotiation. Miss Wei took an entirely creative perspective and cooperated with her teammates and won the negotiation finally. It’s leave me a deep impression about her, "she has the potential in business area."
To my knowledge, Miss Wei is not only strong in academics, but also in sports and social activities. During the period of school,Miss Wei participated in student union and badminton association. She took part with the proprieter to organize a badminton association which achieved a huge success. When she was in student union, she had been honored the “excellence secretary” in our student union.
Based on these qualities, I believe Miss Wei will have greater academic achievement in her future study in your esteemed university. Please contact me if you need more information about her, I appreciate your patience, kindness and help.
Best Regards,
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谢谢
