Dear Dan
My name is Vivian,I come from China.This is my second letter to you.I am very happy,but also a little nervous.Let us pray that my letter will reach your hands .
Dan,for so many years,the feelings of love to you have not changed I am still glad to read the novel "Harry Potter"and this series of film.Because of the love to your heart,I like learning English,and that why my score in English test increases step by step .
“Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows”( Part One)will be released soon,and I am looking forward for it very much,as well imagining your outstanding performance in the film.
China is a very beautiful country,there are many ancient buildings,beautiful scenery there.You will be welcomed if you comes to china .if you please,came to my hometown in Yunnan,there are lots of wild animals.It will be my pleasure to be your guide.
Finally,I wish your new film has a I wish this film to have a good box office and your skill to improve
XOXO
yours Vivian
大概改好了,可能还有小语错.