The animal on the earth
On the earth, (it has more than 1500000 kind of animals.)此处错误,应该为：there are more than 1500000kinds of animals.
And (it has many rare animals)错误!
改成：there are many rare animals.
The animal is our friends, we must protect the animals.
It has three kind of animals. Terrestrial animal, aquatic and flying animal. In China, panda is the National treasure. Panda is lovely and smart. And they are omnivorous animal. They always eat bamboo and plants. Sometimes they eat meat. But at present, (the number of panda is decrease year by year.)错!正确应为：（the number of panda is decreased year by year)
The red crowned care is also very beautiful. But it’s also (decrease ）错!应该是decreased year by year.
The animal is important for us. So, how can we protect the animal?
First, you shouldn’t eat wild animal. They are rare.
Second, don’t faze the animal, they have their life and feelings.
Third, don’t use pesticide, it’s bad for (a)错!应该用the balance of ecological.
We should do something for animal. Because when they die, we will die too. So, help the animal is equal to help us
Let’s protect the animal.
