so i eating some broccoli.把eating改成eat
then ,we eating some steamed stuffed buns and dumplings.开头几个单词改成we also eat
we ate and chat ,each message said,food is delicious .we eat very full.全句改成we eat and chat.the food is delicious.we are very full.
下一句this is后面加a
strawberry开始改成strawberries,oranges,chocolate and candies.
最后一句改成we are in front of the tv watching spring festival gala together.we talk and laugh.I am very happy today.
建议全文改成一般过去时,因为读到后面感觉这是一篇类似日记的英语作业.
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