想请高手帮忙改一篇英语四级作文~谢谢你！PS本人英语比较烂……
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The popular of microblog. (POPULARITY OF MICROBLOGS)Do you have a microblog?T am aware of your answer is yes.(不知道这里要说什么? I GUESS YOU'LL ANSWER YES TO THAT QUESTION.??) Nowadays, microblog is more popular than （ANY）other chat soft（SOFTWARE）.If you have（去掉）WITH microblog, you can write down your thought（THOUGHTS） by only some (A FEW) words. And your friends (COULD) also commicate with you at (ON YOUR) microblog. Surely, you transport this messege(WHICH MESSAGE? TRANSPORT IS NOT THE WORD FOR SURE, ARE YOUR TRYING TO SAY "FORWARD THIS MESSAGE??" 看不懂。) to others who like reading(READING WHAT? ). There are some reasons that why microblog is so popular just i guess. (还是没搞懂这儿的逻辑)As we all konw, coins（EVERY COIN） has two sides. Microblog not only has advantages also has disadvantages.（没有必要用这样的句式，显得啰嗦。MICROBLOG HAS ITS NEGATIVE SIDE TOO.）The biggest problems（单数） is that imformation（拼错了, 哪里的INFO?? THE INFO ON THE MICROBLOG） is (MIGHT NOT BE) not true (REAL). We have discussed on the same problem (没看懂，什么同样问题？). On the other hand, indulging in internet is the second problem with microblog. （改不下去了，看了看后面的话，几乎看不懂。WHAT I THINK YOU MIGHT WANNA SAY HERE IS "MICROBLOG IS A WAY FOR THE WORLD TO PEAK AT ONE'S PRIVACY. "）We both have the thought that i want to know what are you doing where are you going and so on.Eventhough,i am boring so that go to scan microblog.To this end ,we can learn that contral yourself from this phenomenon.

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