please help me to find the mistakes
2个回答

第一行 we was having 中 was 改为were;

第六行 looked over改为 looked around;

第七行 did not do something改为 did not do anything;straight改为 straightly;

第九行 laughed at改为 laughed to;had took off 改为took off或 had to take off;

第十行 clver 改为 clever;ther 改为 the(不过这两个应该是拼写问题);didn't scolded 改为 didn't scold

最后一行 discipline 改为disciplines

额 就这些吧.