1,It helps me remember what I have learned and form[s] good habit of thinking in English[.]I listen a lot and communica[t]e with the others in English.
2,Almost everyone has some kind of [ ] hobby.
3,Some watch television or go to the movies,[while] others participate in the sports.
4,[In] such times,in a way things make the life hard for people.
5,One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in McDonald when two young girls came in hand in hand.
6,After brief discussion we decided to put up a wall newspaper for our class.[did not see any mistake]
7,I think it would be [a] good idea if you could come to school to discuss it with me sometime this week.
8,The USA has much [larger] population than Australia,and American cities are more crowded than Australian ones.
9,Whenever he [dines] out,he always eats a lot of food and spends too long time at a restaurant.
