1. I'm(加a) middle school student of sixteen. I have a
2.weight problem.Some boys often made fun of me
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3.and are unfriendly for me.They call me"Meat Ball",
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4.which makes me feel unhappily.I'm now worried about
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5.my weight.Although I am a bit of too fat,I feel quite
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6.well.I enjoy my meal.I love eating meat very much. √
7.But I like sweet food,too.Now I am getting fatter
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8.and fatter.In the past two months,I have put an 5 kilos.
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9.I've got worried about this,but I don't know (加how)to lose
10.weight quickly.Who can tell me the way of lose weight?
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