I learned from Chang Yi primary school .
语法是对的,但说起来有点别扭,建议改成:
I am study in the Chang Yi primary school.
I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .
还是很别扭,不知道是不是译成了中式英语,建议改成:
All the teachers think I am a good student.
I like to read books and sing songs .建议改成:
My hobby is reading books and singing songs.
I like to study.建议改成:I like studying.