麻烦帮我看下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错?
1个回答

I learned from Chang Yi primary school .

语法是对的,但说起来有点别扭,建议改成:

I am study in the Chang Yi primary school.

I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .

还是很别扭,不知道是不是译成了中式英语,建议改成:

All the teachers think I am a good student.

I like to read books and sing songs .建议改成:

My hobby is reading books and singing songs.

I like to study.建议改成:I like studying.