求改错!一定要语法无错误!I also love the animal very much.I love my fami
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I also love the animal very much.I love my dogs,one male and one female.They recently gave birth to five puppies!This really made me very happy!I have raised three hamsters,a bird,a newt,a cat and a lizard.I would like to spend a lot of time in accompanying them because they are my friends and families.I will take good care of them to make them healthy and happy.And I love my families,my father and mother.I have a twin sister and a little 8 - year-old brother.Although we often fight for fun but still live a happy life.My parents not care much about the grades.They care more about my people skills and characters.I love my family very much.I love painting although I don’t paint very well.I think painting can express my thoughts and feelings.In fact,I just want to express my passion and I want to make friends with you.I am a sensible child.I hope you can like me.I am looking forward to working with you.Best wishes to you!

不过 话说回来 楼主难道全篇都是有道的嘛