1.Last month I go to Manchester for a work meeting.
改正：go改成went √
2.I booked very nice hotel for two nights.And I was very
改正：booked后加a √
3.happy with it.My room was beautiful,but the restaurant
改正：but改成and √
4.served as very good food----in fact my dinner there was
改正：as改成with × → 去掉as
serve表示“供应”时为及物动词,直接加宾语,无须介词
5.delicious.But when I came back from my meeting in the
改正：对的 × → in改成on
“在具体的某一天”时的介词用on
6.second day,I found my room empty.All my things have
改正：room后加was × → have改成had
find可以用“感官动词found + 宾语my room + 宾语补足语empty”结构；而后句必须使用过去完成时,因为disappear发生在found之前,即“过去的过去”.
7.disappeared.I was really worried though I thought I'd been
改正：though改成because × → though改成and
用and更符合前后文逻辑
8.robbed.Then I called the manager and told him about it.Five
改正：manager后加up → 对的
call sb = call sb up 打电话给某人
9.minutes late,a tall waiter came upstairs and checked my
改正：late改成later √
10.room numbers.It turned out that I went to the wrong room.
改正：对的 × → numbers改成number
room number“门房号码”是一个整体,视为单数
