看来,i7003可能英文水平高,指令中的英文很好,没有问题,但中文部分的人称却有混乱之处,理解不连贯.后两句中的两个“我”字应改为“你”,末尾的“你”应改为“他”.
现不揣冒昧,写一张Thank-you Note供提问者参考.
When I went on an errand,I asked my friend Tom to look after my garden.Tom did a very good job.He thought carefully and took a good care of my garden.He made my garden more beautiful than before.Now every time when I go into my garden,I couldn't help thinking of my friend with hearty thanks.