第一问 我自己帮你润色的地方
①the bus stop is near my house.Walk to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.
→the distance to the bus stop is shorter.Walking to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.
②I think that the bus can go to any place where I want to go.
→From my point fo view,the bus can take me anywhere I'd like to go.
③so take the bus,i can enjoying the scenery.
→So I can enjoy the scenery outside the window when I’m on a bus.
第二问
①take the subway,I can save much time.
→I can save much time by taking the subway.
②the city I am living is always in traffic jam
→ the city I am living in has serious problem of traffic jam
③I also prefer the subway because of that is no traffic jams.
→There is another advantage of the subway--no traffic jams.
④the subway is runs on schedule语法错误
→the subway always runs on schedule
